Wednesday, September 28, 2011

A Seperate Peace: Book review

Part One:

            I wasn't really happy with the way this book ended, With Phineas dying and Leper going insane.  Overall it was a really good story and it took my interest from the start to ending.  This book was definitely chosen for its interesting word choice and sentence structure; "bobbing instantly to the surface again, his wet hair plastered in droll bangs to his forehead."  I think this book would look good on peoples permanent records so reading this book might help push them to a better college.  I think the hardest part for me would be the finding things in the book because I'm not really truly sure if I'll be right.  And the parts of explaining the book will be the easiest because when a book is fresh in my mind it sits there, and won't leave, kind of like broccoli on the plate of a seven year old.

Part Two:

            The diction of the novel is neutral diction; with a mix of slang and a little jargon, like "goofy" and nicknames. there is concrete, "The tree was tremendous, an irate, steely black steeple beside the river."  And connotation and denotation, "Finny spoke in his cordial, penetrating voice, that reverberant instrument in his chest." The overall tone in the novel is "Somber", it's like a sad story that has few happy parts for it goes at more of a downfall than a rise. Finny falls out of tree; Leper goes crazy from the war; Finny refuses for there to be war; Gene is blamed for Finny getting hurt; Finny learns that Gene hurting him was the truth; Finny breaks his leg again then dies.  I almost felt like crying the whole story had a downfall in emotions.  I think that the higher the diction and the more complex the tone the more you're going to get out of the book, like learning to read faster.  The higher the diction the harder it is to express the other literary elements.  The tone affects the way the other elements are expressed like the setting; it could be a happy little town in North Dakota, or it could be a military bombing grounds in WWII. Analyzing the tone and diction can increase how you understand the books through tone and diction.

Wednesday, September 21, 2011

Blogger Info (Me)

Hello I am Matthew Moen, and I excel in I believe short stories, as that is my strong point in English. I am an A student except for one B+ that I got in geometry last year.  If you are to follow my blog expect to see the homework assignment answers (no plagiarizing), and maybe every once and a while a post because I felt like it.  Although the second part really depends on what the teacher thinks about it.  When it comes to enlightening the on-line world I am not really sure on how I might do that but I like to write poems.  Should I post a poem site? Or just put some on my blog?  I could do that.  The meaning of English class is the learning a better writing technique the best way to write out something.  English is also learning how to prevent errors like, run-on's, misspelling, punctuation misplacement, and sentence beginners (my struggle).  English is very important because later in life you need it for work.  English is used constantly for reports, presentations, and if you work at a restaurant, writing orders (not much to worry about grammar though).  Excelling in English will help me get better at doing something I love, and maybe get me a really good job.  English will most likely get me into a really good college and that's what I want the most.

            Once again I am Matthew Moen, and this has been my bloggers report.